captain black patch B.M.E

Beginning: Captain black patch went to treasure island.

Middle:The captain made the other pirates dig a hole to find some Treasure.

End:then captain black patch said yay my sand castle then the other pirates said what then captain black patch said oh yeah just wanted a sand castle or then why didn’t you tell us.

Becoming a Martian

Seventy thousand years ago, our first ancestors left Africa to discover the world.to live on mars you have to wear a Suit to protect yourself from the heat.If settlers brought their own food, it would need to last for twenty-six months until the next supply rocket arrives.On Earth, we already have a way to grow crops without soil. It’s called hydroponics.One obvious solution would be to grow food on Mars, but there’s no soil.These first people to Mars will be highly trained, but after that … who knows? Perhaps they’ll ask for volunteers to be the first Martian settlers.You could look for water by drilling deeper into the ground.Now that you know the facts, do you still want to be a Martian? How would you feel about spending eight months in a tiny space with a bunch of strangers.both these methods can provide oxygen, but they require lots of energy.It doesn’t rain on Mars. 

Winter
Winter is coming.
In winter I like building snowballs and snowmans.
Now the snow is pouring down.
The ice is so sharp they look like icey jewels.
Entering igloos are so cool and freezing.
Riding on the freezing cold ice.

Beginning, Middle & End.

I had fun doing this because I liked learning how to retail a story in detail.

Beginning:Meredith went to Polly's coop every day before breakfast, and every day she found an egg.sometime, she thought she liked scrambled eggs best, and sometimes she was sure that poached eggs were better.





Middle:but Polly was sitting on her nest.meredith reached out for the egg, but Polly didn’t move.she looked at Meredith's arm! ‘’Ouch!’’ said Meredith.’’I think there's something wrong with you’ polly.maybe you’re sick let’s call the vet.





End: then the vet had arrived and Meredith said that something was wrong with Polly but then the vet checked Polly and said that Polly's fine but she's trying to keep her eggs safe. 
how can you retail a story in detail.