I had fun doing this because I liked learning how to retail a story in detail.
Beginning:Meredith went to Polly's coop every day before breakfast, and every day she found an egg.sometime, she thought she liked scrambled eggs best, and sometimes she was sure that poached eggs were better.
Middle:but Polly was sitting on her nest.meredith reached out for the egg, but Polly didn’t move.she looked at Meredith's arm! ‘’Ouch!’’ said Meredith.’’I think there's something wrong with you’ polly.maybe you’re sick let’s call the vet.
End: then the vet had arrived and Meredith said that something was wrong with Polly but then the vet checked Polly and said that Polly's fine but she's trying to keep her eggs safe.
how can you retail a story in detail.
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