Through the secret door.

We were doing some narrative writing and one of our prompts was a story about opening a secret door.

One day there was a secret door in the backyard and then the next day they all woke up and then they all went to the back yard. and said should we open up the door and they all said...YES!!! Let’s open it now. okay and then there was a new world and it was full of wonderful stuff like candy and all sorts but then they said why didn’t we open the door ages ago. then the mum said go on then go and have a look around but as soon as they stepped ford… the door had shut and then they said now we are trapped in here.so then they looked around and then they had found some houses for sale so then they said to the shopkeeper can we please by that house over there then the shopkeeper  said shore but first I will go and show you around the house before you take the house and then the family that got trapped said but first we need to go and buy some stuff for the new house so then the time the family got back they came with loads of furniture and stuff they can yous to survive with like pillows blankets and decorations for their rooms and the lounge and stuff and the kids brought some lollies and then they had went to bed then it was the next day and then they had got up and went back to the door and then they tried to open up the secret door and it wouldn't open so then they asked the shopkeepers if the had a key but they said no but then...someone had had a key and then went to go and unlock the door and it opened.

I felt great because what if I had a secret door in my backyard