Edmund hillary Avenue
Papakura,
Nz
3rd August 2021
Jacinda ardern
Tinakori Road,
Thordon
Introduction: I am writing about how people can help people that don't have much money and that need stuff.
Point: To help people with not much money.
In my opinion I think people should maybe gift stuff that they might not need but think other people do need that can't afford it.And it does'nt need to be a big gift but atleast one thing could help people that need it.
Point: To stop stealing peoples money.
I think people should stop stealing other peoples money because they might need that money and you should'nt be stealing peoples money because it is bad and if they really wanted to buy something they would'nt be able to buy it anymore!
Point: People that have hard jobs get payed more.
I think people that have hard jobs get payed more because they are hard jobs and most people go to work to get payed alot of money so they can get stuff for themself and their family.
My Conclusion: I think people should give spare change of stuff that they don't need to people that do need it.
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