Kiora my name is Grace I am from papakura central school.I really like the way that you told about your dot art. Maybe next time you could write more detail about the story.
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Kiora my name is Grace I am from papakura central school.I really like the way that you told about your dot art. Maybe next time you could write more detail about the story.
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