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Monday, May 4, 2020

farming

this is what I would do if I had a farm.what would you do if you had a farm or what would you do if you already had a farm.
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  1. AnonymousMay 4, 2020 at 10:36 PM

    Ka pai Kaylynn! I enjoyed reading your writing - it sounds like what a farmer would do. Remember that a narrative includes a problem and a solution.

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  2. AnonymousMay 5, 2020 at 10:32 PM

    hi my name is kaylynn and next time I will try to put a problem and a solution into my story and thank you for your feedback.

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