I loved your narrative Kaylynn. It made me chuckle when the no swimming sign was chucked into the ocean so that the main character can swim. I wonder if the main character learnt a lesson?
hi my name is kaylynn and thank you I realy appreciate it and yes the main character learnt a lesson and the lesson was to read the signs and not to chuck them sign into the sea because it is important.
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I loved your narrative Kaylynn. It made me chuckle when the no swimming sign was chucked into the ocean so that the main character can swim. I wonder if the main character learnt a lesson?
ReplyDeletehi my name is kaylynn and thank you I realy appreciate it and yes the main character learnt a lesson and the lesson was to read the signs and not to chuck them sign into the sea because it is important.
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